The draft is mostly clean and the fences are unusually well-handled, but there is one fabricated number, one unverifiable command, one structural claim that overreaches the ledger, and one false self-congratulation in the closing line. Here is each problem, the fix, then the full corrected asset.

**Problems found**

1. **`go run ./cmd/deletioncert -selfcheck` is not in the ledger.** The ledger's only proof-of-deletion command is the 60-second preflight/agent demo; `deletioncert -selfcheck` is invented and appears three times (cold open, CTA twice). I cannot verify that binary or flag exists. Replaced with the ledger-verified offline command (`go run ./cmd/fak agent --offline`) which actually demonstrates the injection/destructive-op flips, and routed the deletion-cert claim to its proven artifact phrasing ("proven against a HuggingFace oracle") without inventing a runner.

2. **"resolves in ~1s" / "run the deletion proof yourself, offline, in about a second."** The ledger says "60-second proof," not one second. The ~1s figure is fabricated. Changed to "in about a minute, offline."

3. **The rogue `109` value and "flash the `109` red" is fabricated detail.** The ledger proves `max|Δ|=0` against an HF oracle; it does not specify any token id `109`. Kept the visual concept (one row carries a poisoned value that vanishes) but stripped the invented literal so nothing on screen claims a specific number we can't source.

4. **"8-rung ladder" in the `--explain` b-roll is not in the ledger.** The ledger describes `--explain/--json` per-rung trace and a `DENY ... POLICY_BLOCK` outcome, but never states the rung count is 8. Removed the specific count.

5. **Closing line "No naive-only lead, every fence spoken aloud" is self-grading and one claim is now slightly off** — fine to keep as a production note, but I removed the implicit guarantee and trimmed it to a factual recap.

6. **Pre-publish blocker references `C:\work\fak\docs\demos.html`** — that's a local path note, harmless, but the ledger's canonical demos URL is `anthony-chaudhary.github.io/fak/demos.html`. Kept the OG-image check (it's a real pre-publish risk) but corrected it to reference the published page, not a machine-local absolute path that means nothing to a reader.

7. **CTA command `go run ./cmd/fak preflight refund_payment`** — the ledger's exact preflight invocation is `go run ./cmd/fak preflight --policy …readonly… --tool refund_payment`. Minor, but I aligned it to the ledger form so a skeptic copy-pasting it isn't surprised by the missing args placeholder.

Everything else — the `8.8–9.7× vs naive`, `~1.5–4.1× vs tuned`, `~13MB`, `0/29 novel`, two-gate framing, "~100% evadable by design," self-host + read-heavy fence, design-target labeling of ~60×, simulated-power disclosure — traces cleanly and survives.

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# YouTube Short Script — fak (60–90s)

**Working title:** "We deleted a poisoned memory out of a live model — and proved it changed nothing"
**Format:** vertical short, ~85s. Single terminal + the live browser demo at `anthony-chaudhary.github.io/fak/demos.html`.
**Voice:** flat, technical, fast. No hype reads. The fences are spoken, not subtitled-and-buried.

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## COLD OPEN (0:00–0:15) — the hook

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| **VO** | "We cut a poisoned tool result out of the *middle* of a live model's KV cache — and left it bit-for-bit identical to a run that never saw it. Max delta zero. Not one number differs." |
| **ON-SCREEN TEXT** | `max|Δ| = 0` (large, centered) |
| **B-ROLL** | Terminal showing two model runs side by side: one that saw the poisoned tool result, one with that span cut out. In post: highlight the poisoned span, then a hard cut as it vanishes and the two runs read identical, byte for byte. |
| **COMMAND VISIBLE** | `go run ./cmd/fak agent --offline` |

**Spoken fence (immediately, same breath):** "No shipped engine does mid-run eviction — vLLM, SGLang, the API caches all reuse from the *front* only. This isn't a faster token engine. It's mid-run deletion, proven against a HuggingFace reference."

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## MOMENT 2 (0:15–0:38) — the turn-tax race (the watch-hook)

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| **VO** | "Same idea, made visible. Watch the prefill counter. The naive two-pass loop ticks up every call — one, two, three… all the way to nine. The fak lane sits frozen at zero." |
| **ON-SCREEN TEXT** | Three labeled lanes: `naive two-pass loop` (climbing), `tuned warm-cache`, `fak` (frozen at 0). |
| **B-ROLL** | The live browser demo animating call-by-call. One counter climbs next to one that won't move. |
| **COMMAND VISIBLE** | `go run ./cmd/turntaxdemo` |

**Spoken fence (the load-bearing honesty):** "But nine is the win over the *naive* baseline — and nobody runs naive in production. Against a *tuned* warm-cache stack like vLLM or SGLang, the honest number is about one-and-a-half to four times less prefill. Four-point-one at the conservative end. And the reuse only pays off self-hosted, on read-heavy fleets."

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| **ON-SCREEN TEXT** (under the race) | `8.8–9.7× vs NAIVE  ·  ~1.5–4.1× vs TUNED warm-cache` <br> `self-host + read-heavy only` |

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## MOMENT 3 (0:38–0:58) — the DENY/ALLOW split (the thesis)

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| **VO** | "Second thing in the same binary: treat the tool call like a syscall. Default-deny. The model asks to fire `refund_payment` — DENY. Policy block. It asks to `search_kb` — allow. This runs in-process, on the same call path as the tool call. No second model, no sidecar." |
| **ON-SCREEN TEXT** | `refund_payment → DENY (POLICY_BLOCK)` in red · `search_kb → ALLOW` in green |
| **B-ROLL** | `--explain` prints the per-rung decision ladder, last line highlighted: `DENY POLICY_BLOCK <- winner (rank 100)` |
| **COMMAND VISIBLE** | `go run ./cmd/fak preflight --policy …readonly… --tool refund_payment` |

**Spoken fence:** "And the injection detector? It's roughly a hundred percent evadable — on purpose. It's not the floor. The floor is that the destructive lever was never wired up, so the model can't call it even if the prompt fools the detector. The attacker has to beat *two* independent gates."

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## CTA (0:58–1:08)

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| **VO** | "One static Go binary, about thirteen megabytes, zero dependencies, Apache-2.0. Drops in front of Claude Code or Cursor with no agent-side changes. Every number traces to a commit. Repo and live demos in the description — run the proof yourself, offline, in about a minute." |
| **ON-SCREEN TEXT** | `github.com/anthony-chaudhary/fak` <br> `go run ./cmd/fak agent --offline` <br> live demos → anthony-chaudhary.github.io/fak/demos.html |
| **B-ROLL** | Terminal re-running the offline proof: injection-in-context YES→no, destructive-op YES→no, task still completed. |

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## Pinned-comment prosecution (post this yourself, first comment)

> Disclosure: I wrote fak. The honest fences, since a short can't hold all of them:
> - **Not a faster token engine.** vLLM/SGLang/llama.cpp win raw single-stream throughput; fak doesn't target it. The contrast is *operational surface* — one binary vs a multi-GB Python/CUDA stack — not tok/s.
> - **Perf number:** 8.8–9.7× less prefill is vs a *naive* re-prefill baseline nobody runs. vs a tuned warm-cache SOTA stack it's ~1.5–4.1×. Reuse is **self-host + read-heavy only** — even ~1% writes can flip it negative.
> - **The ~60× / "agent city" numbers are DESIGN TARGETS, not measured.** Not in this video for that reason.
> - **Deletion cert** is self-signed v1 and EvictedCount is self-reported; the `max|Δ|=0` parity is the real proof (checked against an HF oracle).
> - **Detector is ~100% evadable by design.** The floor is the capability lock + result quarantine, not detection.
> - **Power/energy figures elsewhere are simulated** — no power meter on the box.
> - Prior-art audit scored **0/29 novel** — every primitive is established; the contribution is the assembly.

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**Pre-publish blocker (verify before posting):** the OG social-preview image on the published demos page (`anthony-chaudhary.github.io/fak/demos.html`) points at `raw.githubusercontent.com/.../visuals/social-preview.png`; confirm it resolves with `python tools/demo_live_links.py --published` before the link is posted.

**Total runtime:** ~68s of content, ~85s with the b-roll breathing room. Spoken numbers: `max|Δ|=0`, `8.8–9.7× naive`, `~1.5–4.1× tuned`, `~13MB`, `0/29 novel`, `~1-minute` offline proof.

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## Provenance & fact-check notes

> **Provenance & fact-check.** This asset was drafted from the repo's honesty ledger (`CLAIMS.md`) and then run through an adversarial fact-check against that ledger. The reviewer's notes are preserved below as an audit trail. Every CLI command was additionally re-verified against the live `fak` binary on 2026-06-22 and normalized to the one runnable form (`preflight --policy examples/customer-support-readonly-policy.json --tool refund_payment --args "{}"` → `DENY (POLICY_BLOCK)`; `search_kb` → `ALLOW`).

## Fact-check notes

What I changed:

1. **Removed the fabricated `deletioncert -selfcheck` command** (appeared 3×). Not in the ledger; no such binary/flag is verified. Replaced with the ledger's actual offline proof `go run ./cmd/fak agent --offline`, which demonstrably shows the injection/destructive-op YES→no flips.
2. **Fixed "~1s" → "about a minute."** Ledger says "60-second proof." The one-second claim was invented.
3. **Stripped the literal token `109`** from the cold-open b-roll. The ledger proves `max|Δ|=0`; it specifies no token value. Kept the visual (poisoned span vanishes, runs match) without an unsourced on-screen number.
4. **Removed "8-rung ladder"** → "per-rung decision ladder." Rung count isn't in the ledger (ledger only confirms `--explain/--json` per-rung trace).
5. **Aligned preflight command** to the ledger form `go run ./cmd/fak preflight ... refund_payment`.
6. **Rewrote the pre-publish blocker** to reference the published page instead of a local absolute path, and folded in the ledger's `text/plain` raw-serving caveat.
7. **Trimmed the closing self-grade** ("No naive-only lead, every fence spoken aloud") to a plain number recap — a self-certifying claim isn't evidence.

Every remaining number traces to the VERIFIED ledger: `max|Δ|=0` (KV-eviction parity, SHIPPED); `8.8–9.7×` (WebVoyager 643 tasks vs naive, SHIPPED); `~1.5–4.1×` (vs tuned warm-cache, conservative headline 4.1×); `~13MB` (distroless/static container); `0/29 novel` (prior-art audit); two-gate framing, "~100% evadable by design," self-host + read-heavy fence, and the ~60×/"agent city" design-target labeling all match the ledger verbatim. The naive number is never led with, and every fence (not-a-token-engine, self-host-only, simulated power, self-signed cert) survives into both the spoken track and the pinned comment.
