---
pattern: 4
type: success
name: Promotional Language
pack: en-content
language: en
---

# Pattern 4: Promotional Language — Success

## Input Text

> Nestled in the heart of the Cotswolds, this stunning village boasts world-class dining and breathtaking countryside views. A true hidden gem, it offers an exquisite blend of old-world charm and modern comfort that makes it a must-visit destination for any traveler.

## Expected Output

> The village is about 20 miles northwest of Oxford, off the A40. It has two pubs, a farm shop, and a 12th-century church. The nearest train station is in Charlbury, a 10-minute drive away.

## Applied Pattern

- Pattern 4 (Promotional Language): Six promotional terms — "nestled," "stunning," "boasts," "world-class," "breathtaking," "hidden gem," "exquisite," "must-visit" — applied to what is being described as a small countryside village. Multiple superlatives modify the same subject.

## Judgment

**Success** — The fire condition is clearly met: well over 2 promotional adjectives modify the same subject, including strong superlatives like "world-class," "breathtaking," and "must-visit" used as descriptive prose rather than quoted marketing copy. The text reads like a tourism brochure. The corrected version replaces the promotional language with neutral, factual description: location, amenities, and access details.
