---
pattern: 24
type: success
name: Vague Positive Conclusions
pack: en-filler
language: en
---

# Pattern 24 (en): Vague Positive Conclusions — Success Case

## Input Text

> NovaTech reported record revenue of $1.8 billion in fiscal year 2024. The company expanded into three new markets and hired over 600 employees. As the company enters this exciting new chapter, the possibilities are truly endless. A bright future undoubtedly lies ahead for NovaTech and its stakeholders. The best is yet to come.

## Expected Output

> NovaTech reported record revenue of $1.8 billion in fiscal year 2024. The company expanded into three new markets and hired over 600 employees. Management plans to open a European headquarters in Berlin by September 2025 and expects revenue to reach $2.3 billion in fiscal 2025, driven by a new enterprise licensing tier launching in Q1.

## Applied Pattern

- Pattern 24 (Vague Positive Conclusions): Three consecutive vague optimism phrases close the paragraph — "exciting new chapter," "the possibilities are truly endless," "a bright future undoubtedly lies ahead," and "the best is yet to come." None contains a specific claim, date, or number.

## Judgment

**Success** — The fire condition is met: three vague optimism phrases fill the conclusion with zero specifics. The first two sentences contain real data ($1.8B revenue, three new markets, 600 hires), but the final three sentences revert to pure filler. The corrected version replaces the empty optimism with concrete forward-looking plans — a specific location (Berlin), a date (September 2025), a revenue target ($2.3B), and an identifiable product initiative (enterprise licensing tier in Q1).
